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Coming Home to You by *payaso:iconpayaso:





-Coming Home to You-

in the midst of my sorrowful winter
alone and cold on the lake water blue
he came in a happy and warm canter
of sweet scented Autumn-rain hue

looking deep in the eyes of my Robin
clear and sharp as notes of his flute
his name, my heart kept constant whispering
a longing, if not answered, left me destitute

gentle butterfly-kisses of soft sweetness
keeps me enthralled as the works of Leonardo
turned me warm inside and out of my bitterness
safe and trusting, i believe, yes, i do

i long for you, my loverbear
am coming home soon, i swear
©2003-2009 *payaso
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Author's Comments

my first attempt with a sonnet, for someone special, my promise

:hug: :blushes: :hug:

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:iconarwenita:
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: its beautiful twinnie!!!!!!! so so lovely!!! you should start writing this happy sonnets, love sonnets :D :D :D you are amazing at them :D

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:iconjamjanny:
Very lovely! I like it. =)

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:iconpayaso:
thank you =D

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somewhere over the rainbow, am coming home to you :blowkiss: :smooch:
:iconnibor:
*speechless* it's so beautiful! It's very, very, very good, i love it! :hug: :blowkiss: :blowkiss: :hug:
:floating::blushes::love::blushes:
:iconpayaso:
:hug: :hug: :hug:

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somewhere over the rainbow, am coming home to you :blowkiss: :smooch:
:iconnibor:
:blushes: I'm awaiting, and looking so much forward, for the moment that you're comming home :blushes::love::hug::hug::blowkiss:
:iconpayaso:
:blushes: :hug: :hug:

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somewhere over the rainbow, am coming home to you :blowkiss: :smooch:
:icongroovus:
Promises are sweet ...

I like the tone of this and its natural sense of familiarity. It reads easy and flows gently, which coincides nicely with the suggestion of your words.

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I'm jus' here and now
:iconpayaso:
thankee ^_^!

it's my first sonnet, really nervous to show it to anyone.

pardon my delayed reply, i haven't opened my msgs for a long time *silly me* =D

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somewhere over the rainbow, am coming home to you :blowkiss: :smooch:

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